Talk:The Cursed Medicine Cat/@comment-3453120-20120612225950

K, I fixed most of the grammar problems. It started lout good, but then it ended to fast. The climax and the resolution were too close to each other. There was no figurative writing at all. And you said the cats names too much so it sounded weird and repetitive. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm just giving you constructive criticism. It is very good over all though. :)